Okay back again for more of my preparation work for my role!
For my job, I really need to understand the very basics like narrative structures, plots, narratology and a few other things. As I’ve said before, I write in my spare time and can see similarities to short stories and films. To begin with, they both have a beginning, middle and end as well as a crisis. Something has to happen in order for the audience to be interested and it needs to almost be immediately addressed. Short films have simple narrative structures compared to feature length films. As we are looking at making our film five minutes or less, we will need to get to the crisis as soon as possible after developing it quickly before ending it with a climax. If the short film were any longer, the narrative structure soon becomes more complex. In feature length films there is often a long while to set up the problem and a midpoint is set to keep the film strong and advance the story more.
In a short film the audience needs to immediately know the characters, locations, the time in which it is set and where the film is heading. However, our production will differ slightly because we are confusing the audience by blurring the lines of realism. The audience needs to get these main points straight away, unlike if you are writing a story and can take up a lot of time setting up everything to the characters to what is going to happen. I think the most important thing about this is that I remember that I need to get all this out in the open and not spend lots of time setting everything up, getting directly to the point. I will need to set up the crisis as soon as possible so I have enough time to draw it out and offer a conclusion.
Every word will count during this process, especially right at the very start as I will have to reveal what I want to reveal, without giving too much away about everything.
The audience’s attention will be drawn in as soon as the crisis or incident starts to occur and will need to be held. Once everything starts to happen, the story can truly move forward and some sort of plan in constructed to deal with this problem. During this process, there will be obstacles to get over that stand in the way of the climax
The main crisis comes along after the action gets moving and the obstacles are overtaken or getting there. This may be a slight problem in ours as ours will be a continuous revealing of a new realism. In short films, the end and resolution usually come quite quickly, depending on the size of the film. However, our film may not have a direct resolution apart from the realisation that everything they see may not be real.
Vladimir Propp is a good example of someone who analysed narrative structures in folk tales in the 1920’s in Russia. He came up with the theory that any narrative had to have:
• False hero
• Hero
• Dispatcher who tells the hero to go somewhere
• Princess who is the main goal for the Hero
• Helper who helps the Hero on his journey
• Donor who provides the Hero with some kind of help
• Villain who is the main conflict to the Hero.
This links in with what Linda.J.Cowgill says in her book Writing Short Films that the narrative goes like:
• The Hero
• Who wants something
• Takes action to get what he wants
• Hero meets with some kind of conflict
• The conflict leads to a climax
• Climax then leads to resolution for the problem
Propp uncovered a sequence in which he thought applied for every single fairytale written. However, there are critics who have seen flaws in his ideas with tone, mood, writing style and many more. In total there are thirty one functions:
• A community/kingdom/family is an ordered state of being.
• A member of one of the three areas leaves to solve this
• A warning is given or rules are applied to the Hero
• The warning or rule is broken
• Villain finds out something about the Hero who has broken the rules
• Villain deceives victim to gain advantage
• Victim unwittingly helps the victim
• A state of disorder occurs
• The Villain harms a member of one of the three groups at the start
• One of the three groups wants something
• The Hero is sent to get what is wanted
• The Hero plans some action against the Villain
• The Hero leaves home
• The Hero is tested and passes the test and is given a gift or helper
• The Hero reacts to the helper (donor)
• The Hero arrives at place where he can fulfil his quest
• There is a conflict between Hero and Villain
• The Hero is branded
• The Villain is overcome
• The state of disorder is settled
• The Hero returns
• The Hero is perused
• The Hero escapes or is rescued
• The Hero returns home only to not be recognised
• A False Hero claims the reward
• A task is set for the Hero
• The task is completed
• The Hero is recognised
• The False Hero or Villain is uncovered
• The False is punished
• The Hero attains the rewards (either the Princess or the Kingdom)
Looking at his thirty one points, I can see many flaws. It may apply to Russian fairytales but modern and some English fairytales don’t really follow this at all. In fact, there aren’t many False Hero’s in English fairytales. It also focuses on males as being the Heroes, a very old view on things as many fairytales can have female leads. However, it is a valid narrative structure for folk tales, and probably those of Russia. It is a prime example that narrative structures do exist and can be common.
(Vladimir Propp)
Archetypes are extremely important in any piece of literature. As we have done in lessons (which I found quite interesting) we have looked into archetypes in women’s magazines, seeing how the mother and the victim were portrayed. Northrop Frye thought that all archetypes can fall into one of four different types of mythos (narratives): Spring Comedy, Summer Romance, Autumn Tragedy or Winter Irony and Satire.
Comedy narratives would follow:
• Present society remains
• Disapproval of society without revolution
• The society is replaced with a happy society full of people
• This new happy society of people resists the change
• A new contemplative and peaceful view is now seen
• Society ceases to exist beyond contemplation
Romance narratives would follow:
• Complete innocence
• Youthful innocence of inexperience
• Completion of an idyllic
• The happy society present resists any changes
• A new contemplative and peaceful view is now seen
• Society ceases to exist beyond contemplation
Tragedy narratives would follow:
• Complete innocence
• Youthful innocence of inexperience
• Completion of an idyllic
• Individual’s faults
• Natural Law
• World of shock and horror
Irony and Satire narratives would follow:
• Present society remains
• The society is under criticism as no changes are occurring
• The society is changed into one of happiness
• Individual’s faults
• Natural Law
• World of shock and horror
(Northrop Frye narratives are off
http://edweb.tusd.k12.az.us/dherring/ap/consider/frye/indexfryeov.htm)
The reason comedy comes under Spring, is because Spring is a time of rebirth and when things new start and that is symbolised as the Hero appears. Summer is the height of the year when good things happen, the reason why romance is put under that season as romance usually is born or there is some union between characters. Autumn is tragedy and it is portrayed by the death of plant life as they get ready for winter, so a main character or the protagonist may decease. Satire is placed with Winter as it is seen as a rather dark kind of narrative and Winter is when darkness falls very easily. This sort of narrative symbolises darkness coming into power and death.
Frye thinks there are five different worlds and they are: human, animal, vegetation, mineral and water. Each area symbolises a season and whether it causes tragedy or comedy.
However, I think that different archetypes can combine where a tragedy and a romance can come together or a comedy and a satire. His theories are only outlining them as separate genres but unlike other theorists he knows that some actions can be unconscious so they cannot be studied in terms of archetypes.
It is rather difficult to understand but I think the main thing to really understand are the seasons and how they symbolise each genre.
(Northrop Frye)
Narratology is when you study narrative structures and how they change our views. As everyone knows, a narrative is how a story is told. In short stories, most of the actual story is missed out, just like in most books as people want action. Take I Am Legend the novel by Richard Matheson, it starts in the middle because people don’t want to read about every single detail about how the disease came to pass as there are small flashbacks to summarise it. The book starts in the middle and describes his life a year before the end and how it affects him. In short films it is very common to have a narrator to fill in the general gist of everything quickly.
I think it’s obvious that our group will be looking into verisimilitude as we are playing about with what is real and what isn’t. When a film is very realistic then it is full of verisimilitude, or appears to at least be realistic and this can be show using school uniforms for a school based drama. Also most films use the press to make it appear more realistic and plays on amplification of deviance as people know when an outbreak hits such as Swine Flu then it is highly covered by the news so showing a newspaper that has headlines of an outbreak or event will make the film more realistic.
With short films the plot needs to be very tight and to the point. With feature length films there is a long time to develop the plot but short films need to be organised very well. The plot really needs to hit three vital areas to be proven successful: the arrangement of events leading to the climax and resolution, events in the storyline are related and therefore continue the action plus it develops the story and thirdly there needs to be enough conflicting points in the film to capture and hold the audience’s attention.
The plot is simply a series of actions that lead to each other and finally to the end by building up the three points I just talked about. It’s rather easy but most people get plot confused with a story. A story wants to entertain or inform you, not need to the grand event at the end.
What I find quite amazing is when I write, plot lines just appear and link together almost magically, and that can be very handy. I think the plot we have on our short film outlines our lines straight away, as we know what will shock and confuse. Is the narrative is character based then the conflict will come from them but if it isn’t the conflict will stem from that. So, our plot is closely packed and tight already as we have began to think more about it. As soon as the plot is sorted out, the script can be written to a good standard.
Just like a novel or short story, narrative is everything and it will be designed meticulously until perfected, and this applies to scripting short films too.
- Firstly, an idea needs to be made, something strong that will support a short film. A short film portrays events or issues that feature films do not cover. This general idea will support the entire plot.
- The second thing you need to decide when designing the narrative is who you want to aim this to. There is no point scripting a piece of World War One drama to a teenager who loves comedy. So the target audience is everything to the genre you select and can be tricky at times. Take our idea for example, a period drama that appears a documentary but is in fact both and blurs the lines of verisimilitude. We thought that we would aim it at middle aged people to begin with but when we really sat down together and thought about it we wanted to aim this at older teenagers early twenties (people in University) as it strives off the shock factor. If it were aimed at middle aged people we would only work on the period drama.
- Thirdly, the script needs to have a clear outline so we can fill in the needed gaps and see if anything else needs to be included or if there are any problems.
- Fourthly, characters need to be designed closely so that they resemble true human beings as no one is going to feel for a character that is exactly like a blank canvas. They need to know of their goals, have a background and have unique traits.
- Lastly, there needs to be some kind of dramatic event that takes place that sets off the drama and leads to the resolution. A story without drama will attract no one and this should include the characters for us to feel some emotion for them.
Side note - We have been getting together as a group and discussing different elements of the production, mostly the storyline and what we want to happen. It's still a bit blurry to what we really want, especially as timing will be
everything. Also, the script programme is working well as I have been playing about with learning where things are and how certain things affect the other. The programme Celtx, is fairly easy to use and I will start to practise writing my own scripts soon! Watch this space.